Advice

I got some advise for all of you. If your going to play any kind of Chinese History game. Go get Dynasty Warriors It is for the PS2, PS3, and Xbox 360. It has many historical battles and historical samurai in the series. Each of the endings are if that side had won the war. So if your thinking of getting a Samurai game get this one.

Detectives Episode 1 Draft

Detective Episode one: The Weird Voice Message
Base on a true event on July 16, 2009
July 16 09 12:07 PM
Dylan goes to his cell phone and saw a voice message. He listens to it and he hears a weird voice (Wolfgang repeats the message) he yells “What the heck is this message and who the heck is it!” He calls Shelby and tells her to come over and tell Patrick and Nolan we have a case.
Goes to opening theme and who is in it

Characters
Dylan Bigsby as Himself
Shelby as herself
Wolfgang As himself
Nolan As himself
Dustin As himself
Patrick as himself

The start of the case.
July 16 09 1:00 PM
Dylan: So we have some dude who got my number and tried to change his voice to make a joke to go out with me I’m not gay.
Patrick: Right
Dylan: Patrick (glare) you’re working overtime.
Patrick: Crap
Shelby: So who do you think did this?
Dylan: Well according to my cell phones history the number is 262-527-5831.
Shelby: That’s Wolfgang’s number!
Dylan: (Stares at Shelby) so you might have a some kind of lead to this case. Patrick, Nolan leave us.
Nolan and Patrick leave the room.
Dylan: Did you give Wolfgang my number to make this kind of joke are you happy now.
Shelby: Yes I did give wolf the number but I didn’t think he would be doing this.
(Back to Nolan and Patrick.)
Patrick: Well I think we should be going over to Wolfgang’s place.
Nolan: let me get Dustin and then we can go.
Patrick: OK
Should I continue or leave it as a cliffhanger.

...?

What is with the school now and this song called I'm Awesome. Seriously what is with everybody and that song. When ever someone says "I'm awesome" People start to sing the song just stop everyone stop about that song. It is just a wannabe rapper trying to be cool.

Life

Life maybe going faster when where get older. But that doesn't matter to me I like me for me I can do what I want to do in the future. So if I want to be a voice actor I can be a voice actor. If I want to go to Japan I'm going to Japan. If I'm going to play games for a living I will do that. I'll do anything i want without judgement.

Great America Band Trip.

Saturday morning: I woke up at about 6:00PM in the morning waiting for 8:00PM so I can go to the High School. Then when I reached the High School I had to go get my instrument from the band room. After I got my band instrument i hanged out with Dan Gaidosh, his friends, Sean and Patrick in the additorium. After a few minutes later we went on the buses and went to the school to perform. After our band performed we went to Great America. Most of the time we went to some rides like the Demon some water rides and we were soaking after those rides. At night Sean was wasting my battery on my PSP so I was made at him and thinks he is better than me by going on some kiddie rides. At least I went to Great America(inside joke)IN AMERICA.

Pickett's Charge of July 3, 1863

“It’s July the 3rd and this battle is still going on?!” argued Corporal John G. Miller.
“Unfortunately, sir.” agreed Private James Richmond.
“Do you think this battle will still go on during July 4?” Questioned Private Mike Bixby
“No this battle will be long over before July 4!” yelled Corporal John G. Miller.
“Alright 8th Ohio General Hancock wants us to intercept Davis, Lane, and Marshall’s troops to give the rifle men more time to shoot some of Pickett’s troops. TO ARMS!”
Then after that incredible strategy plan the 8th Ohio charged and intercepted the three patrols and gave the troops more time to shoot Pickett’s troops. Who were charging to the stone wall, which was a mile and the troops were tired because they were fighting for two days. During the fight between the troops they were ordered to intercept more of Pettigrew’s men.
“Sir, we have to intercept more of Pettigrew’s troops to give the rifle men more time to kill more of Pickett’s troops.” demanded Private Mike Bixby
“Since when did you give orders Private?” questioned Corporal John G. Miller.
“I didn’t the general sent us a message from one of his men. Yet if we don’t intercept them then the rifle men will not kill enough of Pickett’s men.” replied Mike Bixby.
“Fine, men intercept more of Pettigrew’s men! Now!” demanded John G. Miller.
After that demanded all 950 men charged after more of Pettigrew’s troops. Many of the men died after they intercepted Pettigrew’s troops. Only Corporal John G. Miller, Private James Richmond, Private Mike Bixby, and 847 other men survived the interception tactic. Then they retreated to General Hancock’s tent.
“I want you men to kill the rest of Pickett’s men. They are still charging to the stone wall. To win this battle we need to kill the confederates.” yelled General Hancock.
“But, sir we just got back from a bloody battle between Pettigrew’s men. We can’t just go into a kill zone! We lost 100 of our men! Also were covered in confederate blood!” yelled Mike Bixby.
“Ok, so we will send 500 of your men. Including you three. Private Mike Bixby, Corporal John G Miller, and Private James Richmond.” requested General Hancock.
Then after General Hancock ordered the 503 to intercept the rest of Pickett’s men. It took them 10 minutes to reach the rest of the men. Once they reached the other troops they just stopped and just started firing.
“Huh only 100 men to shoot down this will end quickly.” grinned Private Mike Bixby.
After a while the last fire from a musket shoots the last of the South’s troops. Then the North cheered at the top of their lungs. There were a few surrenders from the south and are now arrested.
“Sir we have won this battle and now we have the advantage in this war.” said excitedly from Private Mike Bixby.
“Yes and now we can finish this war and slaves will be free to be normal citizens.” replied General Hancock.
“Quite a big dream for America isn’t it?” questioned Private Mike Bixby.
“Nothing is too big for America to solve, we have the advantage now, now we can end this war.” answered General Hancock.

Sentence Interrupter

"Hey whats..."
"Quiet I'm thinking."
"Alright"
Later at lunch
"Hey can I talk to..."
"Be quiet"
"I'm not even talking to you..."
"Quiet lets just ignore this person everybody."
"Let's not and say we did."
"Thank..."
"Quiet I'm trying to talk here."
"SO AM I BUT YOU NEVER EVEN LET ME FINISH A SENTENCE SINCE THE BEGINNING OF THE DAY! LET ME JUST FINISH ONE SENTENCE WITHOUT YOU INTERUPTING ME! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!"
"Wow...I'm...I'm Sorry man I didn't know."
"YOU SHOULD HAVE NOTICE AT THE BEGINNING OF THE DAY SHERLOCK!"
At the end of they day the interrupter stopped and let the kid finish his sentances.

Black Sabbath-Sweet Leaf Lyrics

Alright now!
Won't you listen?

When I first met you, you didn't realize
I can't forget you or your surprise
You introduced me to my mind
And left me wanting, you and your kind

I love you, Oh you know it

My life was empty, forever on a down
Until you took me, showed me around
My life is free now, my life is clear
I love you sweet leaf, though you can't hear

Come on now, try it out

Straight people don't know, what you're about
They put you down and shut you out
You gave to me a new belief
And soon the world will love you sweet leaf

Music That Somepeople might think That it is Stupid! While I like it!

Jimi Hendrix: Purple Haze, The Wind cries Mary, Voodoo Child, All Along the Watchtower, Fire.

The Rolling Stones: Satisfaction, You Can't Always Get What You Want, Sympathy for the Devil, Paint It Black, Wild Horses.

Queen: Killer Queen, Bohemian Rhapsody, Another One Bites The Dust, We Are The Champion.

The Turtles: Happy Together

Nic Armstrong: She Changes Like The Weather

O-Zone: Numa Numa

Rockwell: Somebody Watching Me

Blue Oyster Cult: Godzilla, Don't Fear The Reaper

Incubus: Drive

Steve Miller: The Joker, Space Cowboy, Going to Mexico, Saving Grace, Going To The Country, Gangster of Love.

The Police: Roxanne, Demolition man, Message In a Bottle, Synchronicity II, Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic, De do do do De da da da, Invisible Sun, Hungry For You, Rehumanize Yourself, One World(Not Three).

The Beatles: Come Together, Hello Goodbye, All You Need Is Love, Yellow Submarine, Day Tripper.

Black Sabbath: Paranoid, Iron Man, Black Sabbath, Sweet Leaf, War Pigs.

Fall Out Boys: Thnks Fr Th Mmrs, Carpel Tunnel of Love, This Ain't A Scene It's An Arms Race.

Mainly Old songs from the 60's through 90's

Criticism

What is with the world these days? You can't just make fun of a show by just watching the first episode. I was just giving some advise of an anime to watch to a friend. Then after he watched the first episode he just replied he nearly puked and started making fun of the anime. You can't just make fun of the anime by watching the first episode. You have to watch more of the series than just judging the first 30 minutes.

Last Saturday of Spring Break

It was a Saturday morning I just woke up at 10-11AM. Right around 11:45AM the mail man came to the door to deliver something I bought off eBay. After I opened up the box there it was season one and two of Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles on DVD. I decided to open all of them and them put them in the box set. Right after I opened first volume of Tsubasa then started the DVD Player. Then right around 2:30PM my mom came home and took pictures of me with my long hair. At 2:40PM we left the house to go to the Off Broadway Salon to donate my hair. Time 2:45PM My hair appointment started and I started to donate hair by putting my hair in pig tails then they just snipped it off, and started the styling. About 15 minutes passed and now my hair is about one inch long. Now there is pictures of me before and after my hair donation.

Dialogue

It is a normal Monday boring and everyone is close to be asleep. Then there was a huge announcement to start the day and everyone just woke up. Then our teacher started the lesson.

“Hello class we will be talking about dialogue today.” Announced the teacher.

“Umm teacher we already know about dialogue.” Interrupted student one.

“Hmm then if you do know about dialogue? Then how about you give us an example of dialogue on the board?” Asked the teacher.

Then student number just stud up and then sit back down.

“I knew it time to teach it to you kids then.” Said the teacher in victory.

Then the teacher turned and wrote on the board of an example of a dialogue.

“Wow you just had to just give up didn’t you.” Said the coolest kid in the room.

“Be quiet at least I tried to find one but I just went brain dead when I stud up.” Said student one.

“Right?” Said the cool kid in the room with a smirk on his face.

“All right class this is an example of a dialogue on the board. Said the teacher.

It said (“Student one is a cocky one.” Said teacher a). The student one stud up and yelled on the top of his lungs. “HEY!! WAIT A MINUTE? WHY ARE YOU PICKING ON ME?”

“Well I chose you because you were the genii pig of the class so I need someone to pick and you gladly volunteered to be the genii pig.” Replied the teacher.

“Ohh…well…umm…continue then…ha…ha.” replied student one and then sat down again.

“Continuing where I left off is that a dialogue is a…” the teacher continues to teach.

“Well you made a fool of yourself yet again.” said the cool kid in the room.

“Ah be quiet will ya.” Replied student one.

“Nah I’ll still make fun of you.” Said cool kid in the room.

Then after the bell rings every charged out of the class room to their next class. But the good thing about the first hour they get woken up easily.

Mafia

10:30PM
“The Godfather wants you Seeker.” Requested Henchman one.
“Well just another normal day.” Replied Seeker.
Seeker walks in a shady room where there is just one light. The Godfather normally has this room for a secret assassinations, hit men jobs and rank advancement. “You asked for me Godfather?”Asked Seeker.
“Yes I did I want you to be my under boss. You will get to command hit men and get more money.” Answered the Godfather.
“I-I-I’m Speechless. Why me? Why not Frankie he is better with guns than I am-”
“I chose you because you are good at commanding troops and not head strong like Frankie!” interrupted the Godfather. “Do you accept this or do you want to die?”
“I’ll accept your offer and put in good use.” Replied Seeker.
“All right see you at three o’clock AM don’t be late and it will last for two hours. I’m counting on you we are going to talk about the end of the Coca Cola Company and Pepsi will rule.” Requested the Godfather.
“I’ll be there.” Replied Seeker.
1:30 AM
“An hour and thirty minutes till the meeting. I better get going it takes an hour to get to the meeting place.”Seeker talking to himself.
Then Seeker went to his Ford Mustang GT and then went to the meeting place with thirty minutes to spare to listen to his 60’s 70’s and 80’s music mix.
3:00 AM
The doors start to open and Seeker got out of his car and went in. When he got in it was pitch black and you can’t even see what was in front of you.
“Welcome Underboss Seeker.” Welcomed the Godfather.
“We will be talking about how we can destroy the Coca Cola Company. Stop child labor, my foot they’re the ones that use it, Idiots.” Continued the Godfather.
59 minutes later
“Ok Seeker you have 1 minute to get out of here and tell the hit men who they have to kill. GO!” Yelled the Godfather.
4:00 AM
“You got it hit men?” Asked Seeker.
“Are you crazy? Its four o’clock in the morning!” Yelled Hit man two.
“Yes it is but it is the only chance we have to destroy Coca Cola.” Demanded Seeker.
“But I’m a Coca Cola person.” Said Hit man two.
Seeker pulls outs his Magnum and shot hit man two straight in the fore head. “ANYONE ELSE A COCA COLA PERSON!”
“No, Sir” Replied the hit men.
9:00 AM
“Today on the News the Coca Cola Company has been burned down and now Pepsi is the only soda company left.”
“Well you did it kid Pepsi rules the world and now Mtn. Dew is the king of all soda.” Said the Godfather.
“Yes I guess I know what I have to do to end this story.” Said Seeker.
Seeker pulls his magnum out and kills the Godfather and names himself as the Godfather.

Happy Juice Lyrics

Happy Juice
Happy Juice
H-H-Happy Juice
When I fellin blue
I know what to do
I open up some Happy Juice
H-H-Happy Juice
J-J-J-Juice
Doing homework is such a pain
Need my juice to keep me sane
Happy Juice
Happy Juice
H-H-Happy Juice
It's 12 o'clock and I can't sleep
so out of bed i always leep
It's got to be the Happy Jucie
H-H-Happy Juice
J-J-J-Juice
My name is Dylan
And im just chillin
with my Happy Juice
(Bass solo)
My name is Ryan
And im just flyin
with my Happy Juice
(Guitar solo)
My name is Tanner
And im wavin my banner
for Happy Juice
(Drum Solo)
Happy Jucie
Happy Juice
H-H-Happy Juice

The Third Level

Imagine you’re at the Grand Central Train Station in New York City. You just walking around and you get lost on the third level. After you saw "The Third Level" you try telling everyone but they don’t believe you. "The Third Level" is a tragedy with much described characters.

It is a tragedy because the main character is not in control of his sanity. Also it starts out with the main character in conflict. He is in therapy for some place that doesn’t exist. His rise to power is when he found the third level yet it is his tragic fall also. No one believes that the third level exists. The lesson in the story is that continue to believe and people will believe later on.

Charley is the character that had the most detailed over all the characters in the story. Even though Charley is the one that needs psycho therapy. Sam his psycho therapist believes there is a third level because he saw it. Charley’s insanity was solved when Sam wrote that note to make him believe again on the third level.

Even though "The Third Level" in the Grand Central Train Station may not exist. Yet it is a possibility that It may exist. No one really knows so it will remain as an unsolved mystery.

Defend

If people defend me and themselves. I will defend myself and the people I love. With a sheild in my left hand and a sword in my right hand.

Pirates and the Quest for the Island Of Grey Sand

August 2 1777: *BANG BANG*guns firing in the air at the Billy Bones Bar. The whole time in that bar the captains and crews just drink until everyone is drunk. After the captian left he just yelled “Lets go me mateys!” with a drunken style of stanse. The captain was infected with scurvy and had a very classy peg leg. All of the mateys went to the ship exept for the capin boy who asked the captian with a rebel voice “Captain Roger where we going? Do we have a heading?”

“Well cabin boy, one of the drunken crew members found a map to an island called Grey Sand.” Answered Captain Roger.

Cabin boy looks at the crew and asked “Which one?”

“Why you asken so many questions just get on the bloody ship.” Yelled Captain Roger.
The captain is a very good leader but when he’s drunk he is a pain in the… “SET SAIL” Yelled a random crew mate.

“Finally we are out to sea away from the bar. Did we forget anyone?” Asked the captain

“No we didn’t, Sir.” saidcrew mate

“That is not the response im looking for me mateys.”

“Why not?”

“Because of the Annoying one.”

“HEY EVERYONE! Hows it going? Is the rum good? Hey nice scarf.” Yelled the annoying one.

“Good god.” greft the captain.

“Hello Captain Roger sir, where are we heading? Some place good? A place full of rum? RAMBLE RAMBLE RAMBLE.”

While the annoying one is rambling the captain is desiding to ether kill him or kill himself. So he just put some corks in his ears and just ignored him. “OK me mateys it will take 5 months to get to this island.” Anounced Captain Roger.

November 2 1777.

“We quit!” yelled the drunken men.

“All we do is just wait and wait and we ran out of rum.”

“All we have is just fruit and we don’t like fruit we like rum!”

Captain Roger replied “Well why not just jump over board and get eated by the sharks?”

They replied with all them together saying “We will!” Then they just jumped off and they got eated by the white devils of the sea.

“Well there goes 15 members to the sharks.” Said the cabin boy.

“I but we still have 30 crew members we can do this.” Replied Captain Roger.

December 2 1777:

“Captain, CAPTAIN! I jumped over board and now. Im being eaten by paranas in this stange river we just got into!” Yelled Cabin boy.

“Well there goes another crew member why couldn’t it be the annoying one.” worried the Captain.

“Did someone say my name?” Replied the annoying one.

“No one asked you” Yelled the crew.

Following the pirates is the British and there plan to destroy the pirates. While the pirates are searching.

“Well we should go behind the island and shoot the cannons?” Planned the captain of the vessel.

“How about we just go aboard the vessel and capture the ship and crew?” asked British soldier two.

“I liked the captain’s idea because it is sneaky and it is strategy.” Answered the general.

January 1 1778: The crew is starving and the island is still not in sight. They just sigh and keep on looking until.

“Land ho! Off the port baw” Yelled the captain. The entire crew looked at the port baw and they saw the island with grey sand.

“We found it where is the rum ramble ramble ramble” the annoying one rambled.
*Ka Bang* the captain just fires his pistol straight into the annoying one’s head. Then the captain just replies “He was getting to annoying.”

As they were about to go to their dingy they say the British right behind the island with their cannons facing them. Last sounds they heard was the cannons firing and destroying their entire bodies.

After the British destroyed the pirates. The British went on the island and got killed by a mysterious force.

Godfather Death

You’re just a baby and your father is trying to find a godfather for you. Also your father has twelve children and you were the thirteenth child. Don’t forget your godfather is Death. "Godfather Death" is an irony and has religious myths.

One example of an irony in this short story is that it has God, The Devil, and Death. These people don’t exist in human life they’re just spirits. Another exapmle of an irony is that it starts out in conflict. The conflict is that the man has twelve children and the thirteenth has arived and now it is going to be giving to a godfather. Next its unrealistic spirits can’t be a godfather because they are spirits can’t handle a child. Last is that it ends with death with the main character dies thanks to death for not letting him live to marry his love.

Also this story has some religious myths. For example god is a spirit that exist in heaven and takes the souls of the men who did good doings. On the other hand the devil is a spirit of hell that takes the souls of the men who did bad doings. Death he just takes the souls and gives them to the devil or god. Even though the author had three spirits that involve christianty, what about other gods like chinese gods and indian gods?

Even though this story is an irony and has religious spirits in it, I have one question to ask about this story. Why not other religions? Like the Chinese, monks, etc. Why just those three: god, devil, and death? Obviously this is a Western story. However, any culture can learn a lesson from this story: You can't make a deal with Death.

The Raven

Imangine you’re just napping when a late visitor comes into the night. Rapping around your door. You’ll be terrified of the fear but you just keep on napping. But you still fell the presence of that late visitor. The Raven from Edger Allen Poe is a tragedy and is very dark.

The Raven is a tragedy because it is realistic a raven does sometimes symbolize danger/ dead/ evil/ etc. The character is in conflict because someone is in his chamber rapping around his door. His rise to power is when he talks to the late visitor which is also the tragic fall. The late visitor refused to leave. It doesn’t end with death; however, the narrator is left feeling alone and depressed.

As a tragedy, this poem is dark because this lines from the poem “Thrilled me - filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before”. Also the raven is a symbol of darkness. In this poem another example of darkness is the characters. Although the main character has no detail, he is always in his chamber most of the time.

This poem is very dark and is a tragedy. I want to have some more information at the end; for example is he going to sit down and do nothing or get rid of the raven.

Prisoner Taking Over Alcatraz

Alarm sirens are going off, the prisoners are taking over and all the officers are being held hostage. Except they forgot one, Alfred Yackatori.

Five hours ago. “Yackatori! In My office now!” yelled Sting. Sting is this strict, middle age man who looks a lot like the bass player Sting. But the difference between them is that Sting’s real name is Manny Norris. While Yackatori is this 24 year old man who is average in weight and height at about 6’5”. Lucky for Sting, Yackatori is the top man on the Alcatraz Search Party, prison riot stopper, and former Pewaukee Police Department (PPD) chief.

“You wanted to see me sir.” answered Yackatori.
“Yes I did, I want you to go see if any of the inmates are holding contraband weapon or drug related. I don’t care how you do it, I want to see something on my desk.” yelled Sting.
“Yes sir. Oh, don’t forget to play the bass while I’m gone. Ha ha ha ha.” Yackatori laughed as he walked out the door.
“Man I hate that inside joke.” Sting said to himself.
Yackatori was thinking of how to get the inmates out of their jail cell so he could check things out. Then it hit him, he made an excellent plan. He pressed the escape doors so the inmates can go out to get some air. After all the inmates were out of their cells, he started his search. After the search he just found a pack of cigarettes, a pocket knife, a bag full of leaves, and Smarties. “Ah nothing much here, only one thing to bring to the boss.” Yackatori sighed.
He grasped his walkie talkie. “Bring in the prisoners” Yackatori said to the person on channel 3.
“Roger that.” said the man on channel 3.
“I really didn’t get your name what is it?” questioned Yackatori
“Oh I forgot, let me introduce myself, I’m Bruce William.” replied Bruce.

Yackatori was not very excited after his search but Sting accepted the stuff he had found. Sting nodded and said “Ok, Yackatori I want you to stay overnight and watch the inmates.” Yackatori replied “So you want me to baby sit the inmates while they are sleeping?”
“Not really baby sit, you’ll be in the control room with Bruce. You hear me?” commanded Sting. “Yes sir.” answered Yackatori.

4 hours later. “Man this shift is stupid; all we do is monitor the inmate’s sleep.” complained Bruce. “Ha, try doing this for three to four years.” commented Yackatori.
“True, you know more than this newbie.” recommended Bruce.
“Hey do you want a Mountain Dew?” questioned Bruce.
“Yeah throw me one!” answered Yackatori.
“Hey how old are you Bruce?” questioned Yackatori.
“Well I’m…21.” answered Bruce.
“Sweet that is when I started working as a cop.” commented Yackatori.
“Well I’m going home I will come back on Friday; later.” sighed Bruce.
“Ok later I have to work 24/7 I’m jealous of you.” smiled Yackatori.
“I need some music; let’s see oh here we go some 80’s music.” Yackatori decided.
“Demolition Man? No. War Pigs? Yeah.” Yackatori nodded.

Before Yackatori played the song he pressed the escape doors and didn’t know about it.
“Generals gathered in their masses. Just like witches at black masses. Evil minds that plot destruction. Sorcerers of death's construction. In the fields the bodies burning. As the war machine keeps turning. Death and hatred to mankind. Poisoning their brainwashed minds. Oh lord yeah! (While he is listening to the song prisoners are taking over Alcatraz.) Politicians hide themselves away. They only started the war. Why should they go out to fight? They leave that role to the poor. Yeah! Time will tell on their power minds. Making war just for fun. Treating people just like pawns in chess. Wait 'til their judgment day comes. Yeah! Now in darkness world stops turning. Ashes where the bodies burning. No more war pigs have the power. Hand of God has struck the hour. Day of Judgment, God is calling. On their knees the war pigs crawling. Begging mercy for their sins. Satan laughing spreads his wings. Oh lord yeah!”
“Man I love that song.” smiled Yackatori. As Yackatori looked out the window he saw all the inmates out of their cells and tying up everyone. “Ah oh.” Yackatori gulped
“How am I going to get all of Alcatraz back in order?” Yackatori questioned himself. Yackatori grabbed his walkie talkie and calls in Sting
“Sting, Sting, you there man?” Yackatori yelled.
“Sorry Yackatori but Sting is not here now ha ha ha.” Laughed inmate one
“Who is this?” questioned Yackatori.
“You don’t remember? I’m the man you chased all over San Francisco, Jack, Jack Dew.” answered Jack. Jack is this cocky dude who never listens to the rules so he is in Alcatraz for life.

“Oh my god, now I remember.” commented Yackatori
“I can’t believe you accidently press the escape button to free us.” laughed Jack.
“So where are you, Yackatori.” asked Jack.
“Behind you.” Answered Yackatori

Then Yackatori throw a powerful punch to Jack. Jack laughed and pulled out a pocket knife. So did Yackatori.
“I’m glad I saved this thing,” said Yackatori.

All the inmates surrounded Jack and Yackatori. Jack charged at Yackatori but missed. After that charge Jack made. Yackatori turned and grabbed Jack’s arm and throws the pocket knives away.
“Let’s do this fist to fist.” subjected Yackatori.
“Deal” Jack nodded

Jack and Yackatori got to the center of the crowd and started to fist fight. Jack made the first throw but Yackatori blocked it and throw another powerful blow and nearly broke Jack’s jaw. Jack fell to the ground then came back up with a fist aimed right at Yackatori. Before He had a chance to throw it Yackatori just round house kick him. Then Yackatori grabbed his taser and tased, Jack until he gave up. After 30 seconds Jack gave up.
Yackatori yelled “Back in your cells now.”
Everyone went back to their cells and locked the cells.
“Well Yackatori, I’m retiring; I’m giving you my job as lead chief of Alcatraz.” said Sting
“Thanks Sting!” Yackatori excitedly yell.

5 months later. Yackatori is running thing good at Alcatraz and Bruce is following Yackatori’s footsteps. Bruce is now the leader of riot stoppers.

Jack died from an attack from fellow inmate five weeks after the takeover of Alcatraz.

The Tell Tale Heart

Imagine being stared down on by an old man with a demented eye. Will you kill the man; or will you just ask him to put a patch over the evil eye? That is what the narrator did in “The Tale-Tell Heart”, he killed him. “The Tell-Tale Heart” is a fascinating story that is a tragedy with shady character; the narrator.

The reason why it is a tragedy because it starts out with it in conflict when the eye is destroying him on the inside until he can’t get enough. Also his rise to power is when he kills the old man and hides the body. His Tragic fall is when he lost his sanity and tells the cops where the body is hidden. He doesn’t die at the end but his sanity dies and he goes to insanity. This story could happen in real life but someone must be really terrified of just one eye.

The narrator is very questionable in this story. Reason why because it started out that he thinks that he is sane then went to insane. Most of the time the narrator is trying to get rid of the evil eye and trying to prove he is not insane. Unfortunately his urge of the eye wants him to kill the old man so he can be rid of the evil eye forever. After he killed the old man his gilt came to affect when the cops came and hears a dense heart beating sound.

Why did you kill the old man? He was a gentle man! Why did you kill him? This interesting short story is a very dark tragedy and has an uncertain character; the narrator. If you’re going to read a very dim tragedy, read Edgar Allen Poe’s stories.